(Spoiler) Review: Ashes to Ashes by Jenny Han and Siobhan Vivian

20743262Ashes to Ashes by Jenny Han and Siobhan Vivian
Genre: Contemporary, Paranormal, Romance
Published by: Simon & Schuster
Pages: 368
Format: e-book
Rating: ★★
Series: Burn For Burn (#1) | Fire With Fire (#2)
Where to Find: Goodreads | Amazon

I was so unbelievably excited to read this book. Fire With Fire was one of my favourite books of the year and I needed to know what happened next. I’d seen a couple of reviews floating around Goodreads about how rushed the ending was and how it wasn’t as great as the other book in the series, but I refused to believe this would be the case. How could it be when Fire With Fire had been SO GOOD? But boy oh boy was I proven wrong. Ashes to Ashes was rushed and the ending was straight up ridiculous. What we have here, ladies and gentleman, is a perfect example of wasted potential.

(Disclaimer: you should still read this series if you haven’t because the first two books are 5 star reads and totally worth it, but just prepare yourself for a disappointing ending.)

I have every intention of ranting now about why this was not what I wanted it to be and where, I think, the pit falls lie. This review will contain spoilers, so if you haven’t read the series then you may want to come back later to let off some steam too. If you have no intention of reading this series then enjoy, because the RANT BEGINS NOW.

Okay, so the first half was okay. (Seriously, that’s the best adjective I can think of.) It wasn’t to the same standard of the first book especially considering it was literally just been revealed that MARY’S BEEN A GHOST THIS ENTIRE TIME, WHAT THE HECK, CAN EVERYONE BE MORE FREAKED OUT ABOUT THIS PLEASE.

But no, because although we, the readers, know that Mary’s a ghost Kat and Lillia don’t find out until the very end – even though you’d think that they’d be like, “hey, we haven’t seen our other BFF Mary in a while, I wonder what happened to her? Let’s actually make an effort to hunt her down and get some answers.” And when they do find out, from reading some occult books and putting the pieces together in Kat’s case and actually seeing ghost Mary is Lilia’s they start to do some witchy, spell casting mumbo jumbo and don’t even think to question how ridiculous this all is. Suffice to say the blend of paranormal and contemporary did not work as well as it was supposed to. I’ve read quite a few teen thriller’s with the same kind of plot and the supernatural elements are always explained away, and often I’m annoyed about this because why can’t it be a supernatural case. Well, Ashes to Ashes showed me why supernatural forces shouldn’t be the only explanation. Because it’s freakin’ stupid, that’s why.

WHAT THE HECK WAS THE EPILOGUE. For goodness sake! Alex literally – literally – says I’m over Lillia to Kat and I won’t be waiting when this thing with Reeve doesn’t work out to Lillia. WHY THEN IS HE HER BOYFRIEND/FUTURE HUSBAND IN THE EPILOGUE. This literally makes no sense! Alex is spineless and can’t see a toxic girl who doesn’t really love him and Lillia is a girl who wants to have her cake and eat it too and is so infuriatingly perfect because she gets everything she’s ever wanted. I’d even started to like Lillia but then she just turned out to be a classic Jenny Han stock character. Nothing special here, folks. Reeve was blatantly the perfect guy and no I will not accept their break up being explained away by some stupid throw away line about them only coming together because of Rennie’s death anyway. No, it’s mentioned multiple times that Reeve’s always loved Lillia and never loved Rennie and it’s obvious from the way that she acts that Lillia loved Reeve AND NOT, I REPEAT NOT Alex. I reject this epilogue whole-heartily.

Also, what a lame ending for Kat. Yeah yeah, New York suited her, but what was the point of all that build up for getting into Oberlin. Was all that tension and revelation for nothing? Why did Lillia end up being the star of the show anyway. If Lillia got the stupid perfect ending, why couldn’t more emphasis be put on the rest of Kat’s life. I absolutely hated how they brushed off Reeve’s entire life with a sentence. IT WAS SO RUSHED.

I did like some elements of this book, don’t get me wrong. Whenever Lillia and Reeve were together I basically had heart palpitations it was so romantic. The authors worked so hard for us to fall in love with Reeve – and I did – after presenting him as a right dick, only to reveal he was just misunderstood and Mary had the wrong idea all along, and then to just cut him out seemed unresolved. If you wanted Lil to end up with Alex, at least make it clearer from the beginning that that was your end goal.

To be honest, this would have been a fantastic ending had the epilogue been scraped/ rewritten so that Reeve and Lillia get the happy ending the deserved and if Mary had actually got some closure. There was no confrontation. I needed and Reeve to talk it out big time and come to a resolution. Uh, I’m so annoyed at how much potential was wasted here.

RANT OVER. Phew, I can breathe again! Now excuse me, whilst I try and eliminate that terrible terrible epilogue from my memory and replace it with my own re-written version.

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One thought on “(Spoiler) Review: Ashes to Ashes by Jenny Han and Siobhan Vivian

  1. Hello, I just finished this trilogy (a few years later), and I have to say I agree completely with your review. I feel like the fans should write their own epilogue where Reeve and Lilia end up together and he doesn’t get hurt playing football again. I feel like Kat should have gone to Oberlin especially after everything she went through to get in and she should have ended up with Alex because they were honestly perfect for each other. Alex should have become something through his lyrics and music. Mary should have gotten better closure. Also perhaps including something about Ash, PJ, and Derek. Also I felt like the characters were similar to the characters in Jenny Han’s other book series “To All the Boys I’ve Loved Before”, specifically Lilia, Reeve, Nadia, and Alex.

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